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The lights shining bright on me.
The crowd anxiously watching.
I was 12, when I first performed.
My voice enchanting, piano keys strumming.
Music, how beautiful she is.
Fell in love with the way she talked to me.

All I can see, the future ahead of me.
The crowd is glaring at my presence
Music enlightens my life.
Music is like magic.
Sometimes joyful, sometimes tragic.
Ms. Miller
8/26/2010 10:03:03 am

Oh, I love the line "music, how beautiful she is"!

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sophie
9/10/2010 01:39:31 am

i love it! i love music, and i like how you compared the music to a girl.

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Brandon
9/10/2010 01:40:11 am

Good poem, nice adjectives with a good flowing poem

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semere
9/30/2010 03:19:54 am

so, this is "your girl"
ha, but i like how youre telling a story

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